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2025
Branch Zagreb
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08.12.2025.
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12.11.2025.
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2024
HUPE Conference 2024
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25.11.2024.
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25.11.2024.
Code: Yellow82
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A smile that made a difference

Black Hollow City slept beneath a curtain of mist. The woods pressed close around the town like a secret it wanted to keep. For weeks, no one had slept soundly. The nightmares came first, vivid, bleeding things that clung to walking minds. Then came the disappearances. Michelle Thorne, the town librarian, sat alone beneath flickering candlelight, thumbing through a weathered church journal.The words were jagged, desperate: "The Abyss feeds not on flesh, but on fear. To see it is to invite it. To name it is to call it." She closed the book. Outside, thunder rolled through the valley.

Across town, Kyle, Clara, and Chris huddled in the old church. Between them, the same sigil from the church journal was scrawled on the floor in chalk. Candles guttered in the damp air. "It's just old superstition," Kyle said, forcing a grin. "We'll prove it's fake." Clara hesitated. "It feels... wrong." Chris laughed. "What's the worst that could happen? We summon the Latin boogeyman?" They read the words together: "The spirit held back. The name pronounced: The Abyss. Born of first fear The sharper of trembling minds. Come without flesh. Come knowing. Let fortitude diminish. Let certainty be broken. Hear the bond: what is opened is only closed thus - by sacrifice given, or fear overcome. Blood offered voluntarily or fortitude untamed." When the last syllable fell, the candles went out. A cold wind swept the room. In the dark, something whispered Clara's name.

By morning, the fog had thickened. People spoke of shadows that moved without light. The butcher saw his dead wife smiling at him through the window. The children refused to sleep. Then Kyle came to the library, pale and trembling. "We woke it," he whispered. "We didn't mean to." Michelle froze. "Woke what?" she asked. "The Abyss..." Chris finished for Kyle. That name, she had seen it in her great-grandfather's church journal. She led Kyle and Chris into the archives and opened the old journal. "Elias Thorne," she said. "He tried to seal the Abyss in 1889. He failed."

That night, Michelle dreamed. The library stretched into infinity. Her mother's voice drifted from between the shelves. "You seek to end what you carry inside." Then, her face split into shadow, and from the mouth rose something vast, eyes like hollow moons, mouth like a black sun. "You cannot end me," it whispered. "For I am fear, and fear is me." Michelle woke with blood running from her nose and terror in her throat.

By morning, Clara was already sitting in the library, sketching furiously. The drawings sprawled across the table - twisted figures, mouths open in endless screams, a void swallowing the town. Michelle stared. "Clara, when did you draw these?" Clara blinked. "I don't remember. My hands just... moved." Chris tried to joke. "Guess she's the Abyss' artist-in-residence." But the joke fell flat.

That night, they returned to the old church. The sigil on the altar glowed faintly, as though remembering them. Michelle traced its edges with shaking fingers, reading Elias's final entry aloud: "The vessel carries the Abyss. It must be sealed through reflection, or all will drown in their own fears." Kyle frowned. "The vessel? What does that mean?" Michelle didn't answer.

The shadows came before midnight. The church doors burst open, and the air grew thick. From the corners, faces took shape - Kyle's father, Chris's sister, Michelle's mother - their voices weaving into a chorus of guilt. "You let us die," they hissed. Michelle steadied her breath. "You're not real." The illusions dissolved. But then, Clara screamed. She fell onto her knees, clutching her chest. "It's inside me," she gasped. "It's burning." The air around her warped. Her skin rippled, black veins spreading beneath the surface. The candles exploded. Michelle flipped through the journal, panic rising. "Elias explained in his journal that the vessel chooses empathy, someone open to pain." Clara's eyes turned solid black. "It hurts," she whispered, and then screamed as something tore out of her. Dark tendrils erupted from her spine, shredding flesh and bone. Her body lifted from the floor, suspended by the shadows spilling from within. Chris staggered back, horror twisting his face. "Clara!" Kyle shouted. Her voice came from everywhere and nowhere, layered and echoing: "You called me. You gave me breath. Now I am all that you fear." Her body split apart, dissolving into the growing storm of darkness that filled the church. Where Clara had stood, the Abyss towered, shifting, screaming faces twisting through its form. Michelle clutched the journal. "If we reflect it, if she sees herself, it might break!" They began the incantation: "By the fear once faced and not fled, I raise the light that is earned, not given. Let bravery be named; not as absence of dread, but as the will that walks through it. Let sacrifice be weighed, not in blood, but in what she chose to leave behind. Abyss, born of unreflected terror, beheld, now, in the mirror of knowing..." The sigil on the floor flared with blinding light. The creature convulsed, its many faces flickering, and for an instant, Clara's human eyes appeared within the void. "Michelle..." her voice whispered faintly, distant, terrified. "I can still see you," Clara cried. "It's too deep. Seal it." Her tone changed, steadier, resolute. "Do it before I lose what's left of me." Tears streaked Michelle's face as she spoke the final words: "You are seen, and in seeing, diminished. I seal thee within remembered shadow. Fear acknowledged. Courage affirmed. The circle closes." The light blazed, and the Abyss screamed, not in pain, but in despair. As it collapsed inward, Michelle heard Clara's last whisper echo through the fading darkness: "Tell them I wasn't afraid." Then silence.

When dawn came, the fog began to lift. The air smelled of rain and ash. The nightmares were gone. Michelle stood on the chruch steps, the scorched journal clutched in her hands. Kyle and Chris stood beside her, hollow-eyed. "She's gone," Kyle said softly. Michelle nodded. "Her body, yes. But she's still in there. Keeping it contained." Chris looked up at the pale morning sky. "Do you think she's suffering?" Michelle shook her head. "No. She faced her fear. That's more peace than most ever find." In the distance, the mist swirled once, and for a moment, it formed the faint outline of a girl's face, smiling sadly before fading into the light.



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A smile that made a difference

Black Hollow City slept beneath a curtain of mist. The woods pressed close around the town like a secret it wanted to keep. For weeks, no one had slept soundly. The nightmares came first, vivid, bleeding things that clung to walking minds. Then came the disappearances. Michelle Thorne, the town librarian, sat alone beneath flickering candlelight, thumbing through a weathered church journal.The words were jagged, desperate: "The Abyss feeds not on flesh, but on fear. To see it is to invite it. To name it is to call it." She closed the book. Outside, thunder rolled through the valley.

Across town, Kyle, Clara, and Chris huddled in the old church. Between them, the same sigil from the church journal was scrawled on the floor in chalk. Candles guttered in the damp air. "It's just old superstition," Kyle said, forcing a grin. "We'll prove it's fake." Clara hesitated. "It feels... wrong." Chris laughed. "What's the worst that could happen? We summon the Latin boogeyman?" They read the words together: "The spirit held back. The name pronounced: The Abyss. Born of first fear The sharper of trembling minds. Come without flesh. Come knowing. Let fortitude diminish. Let certainty be broken. Hear the bond: what is opened is only closed thus - by sacrifice given, or fear overcome. Blood offered voluntarily or fortitude untamed." When the last syllable fell, the candles went out. A cold wind swept the room. In the dark, something whispered Clara's name.

By morning, the fog had thickened. People spoke of shadows that moved without light. The butcher saw his dead wife smiling at him through the window. The children refused to sleep. Then Kyle came to the library, pale and trembling. "We woke it," he whispered. "We didn't mean to." Michelle froze. "Woke what?" she asked. "The Abyss..." Chris finished for Kyle. That name, she had seen it in her great-grandfather's church journal. She led Kyle and Chris into the archives and opened the old journal. "Elias Thorne," she said. "He tried to seal the Abyss in 1889. He failed."

That night, Michelle dreamed. The library stretched into infinity. Her mother's voice drifted from between the shelves. "You seek to end what you carry inside." Then, her face split into shadow, and from the mouth rose something vast, eyes like hollow moons, mouth like a black sun. "You cannot end me," it whispered. "For I am fear, and fear is me." Michelle woke with blood running from her nose and terror in her throat.

By morning, Clara was already sitting in the library, sketching furiously. The drawings sprawled across the table - twisted figures, mouths open in endless screams, a void swallowing the town. Michelle stared. "Clara, when did you draw these?" Clara blinked. "I don't remember. My hands just... moved." Chris tried to joke. "Guess she's the Abyss' artist-in-residence." But the joke fell flat.

That night, they returned to the old church. The sigil on the altar glowed faintly, as though remembering them. Michelle traced its edges with shaking fingers, reading Elias's final entry aloud: "The vessel carries the Abyss. It must be sealed through reflection, or all will drown in their own fears." Kyle frowned. "The vessel? What does that mean?" Michelle didn't answer.

The shadows came before midnight. The church doors burst open, and the air grew thick. From the corners, faces took shape - Kyle's father, Chris's sister, Michelle's mother - their voices weaving into a chorus of guilt. "You let us die," they hissed. Michelle steadied her breath. "You're not real." The illusions dissolved. But then, Clara screamed. She fell onto her knees, clutching her chest. "It's inside me," she gasped. "It's burning." The air around her warped. Her skin rippled, black veins spreading beneath the surface. The candles exploded. Michelle flipped through the journal, panic rising. "Elias explained in his journal that the vessel chooses empathy, someone open to pain." Clara's eyes turned solid black. "It hurts," she whispered, and then screamed as something tore out of her. Dark tendrils erupted from her spine, shredding flesh and bone. Her body lifted from the floor, suspended by the shadows spilling from within. Chris staggered back, horror twisting his face. "Clara!" Kyle shouted. Her voice came from everywhere and nowhere, layered and echoing: "You called me. You gave me breath. Now I am all that you fear." Her body split apart, dissolving into the growing storm of darkness that filled the church. Where Clara had stood, the Abyss towered, shifting, screaming faces twisting through its form. Michelle clutched the journal. "If we reflect it, if she sees herself, it might break!" They began the incantation: "By the fear once faced and not fled, I raise the light that is earned, not given. Let bravery be named; not as absence of dread, but as the will that walks through it. Let sacrifice be weighed, not in blood, but in what she chose to leave behind. Abyss, born of unreflected terror, beheld, now, in the mirror of knowing..." The sigil on the floor flared with blinding light. The creature convulsed, its many faces flickering, and for an instant, Clara's human eyes appeared within the void. "Michelle..." her voice whispered faintly, distant, terrified. "I can still see you," Clara cried. "It's too deep. Seal it." Her tone changed, steadier, resolute. "Do it before I lose what's left of me." Tears streaked Michelle's face as she spoke the final words: "You are seen, and in seeing, diminished. I seal thee within remembered shadow. Fear acknowledged. Courage affirmed. The circle closes." The light blazed, and the Abyss screamed, not in pain, but in despair. As it collapsed inward, Michelle heard Clara's last whisper echo through the fading darkness: "Tell them I wasn't afraid." Then silence.

When dawn came, the fog began to lift. The air smelled of rain and ash. The nightmares were gone. Michelle stood on the chruch steps, the scorched journal clutched in her hands. Kyle and Chris stood beside her, hollow-eyed. "She's gone," Kyle said softly. Michelle nodded. "Her body, yes. But she's still in there. Keeping it contained." Chris looked up at the pale morning sky. "Do you think she's suffering?" Michelle shook her head. "No. She faced her fear. That's more peace than most ever find." In the distance, the mist swirled once, and for a moment, it formed the faint outline of a girl's face, smiling sadly before fading into the light.



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A smile that made a difference

Black Hollow City slept beneath a curtain of mist. The woods pressed close around the town like a secret it wanted to keep. For weeks, no one had slept soundly. The nightmares came first, vivid, bleeding things that clung to walking minds. Then came the disappearances. Michelle Thorne, the town librarian, sat alone beneath flickering candlelight, thumbing through a weathered church journal.The words were jagged, desperate: "The Abyss feeds not on flesh, but on fear. To see it is to invite it. To name it is to call it." She closed the book. Outside, thunder rolled through the valley.

Across town, Kyle, Clara, and Chris huddled in the old church. Between them, the same sigil from the church journal was scrawled on the floor in chalk. Candles guttered in the damp air. "It's just old superstition," Kyle said, forcing a grin. "We'll prove it's fake." Clara hesitated. "It feels... wrong." Chris laughed. "What's the worst that could happen? We summon the Latin boogeyman?" They read the words together: "The spirit held back. The name pronounced: The Abyss. Born of first fear The sharper of trembling minds. Come without flesh. Come knowing. Let fortitude diminish. Let certainty be broken. Hear the bond: what is opened is only closed thus - by sacrifice given, or fear overcome. Blood offered voluntarily or fortitude untamed." When the last syllable fell, the candles went out. A cold wind swept the room. In the dark, something whispered Clara's name.

By morning, the fog had thickened. People spoke of shadows that moved without light. The butcher saw his dead wife smiling at him through the window. The children refused to sleep. Then Kyle came to the library, pale and trembling. "We woke it," he whispered. "We didn't mean to." Michelle froze. "Woke what?" she asked. "The Abyss..." Chris finished for Kyle. That name, she had seen it in her great-grandfather's church journal. She led Kyle and Chris into the archives and opened the old journal. "Elias Thorne," she said. "He tried to seal the Abyss in 1889. He failed."

That night, Michelle dreamed. The library stretched into infinity. Her mother's voice drifted from between the shelves. "You seek to end what you carry inside." Then, her face split into shadow, and from the mouth rose something vast, eyes like hollow moons, mouth like a black sun. "You cannot end me," it whispered. "For I am fear, and fear is me." Michelle woke with blood running from her nose and terror in her throat.

By morning, Clara was already sitting in the library, sketching furiously. The drawings sprawled across the table - twisted figures, mouths open in endless screams, a void swallowing the town. Michelle stared. "Clara, when did you draw these?" Clara blinked. "I don't remember. My hands just... moved." Chris tried to joke. "Guess she's the Abyss' artist-in-residence." But the joke fell flat.

That night, they returned to the old church. The sigil on the altar glowed faintly, as though remembering them. Michelle traced its edges with shaking fingers, reading Elias's final entry aloud: "The vessel carries the Abyss. It must be sealed through reflection, or all will drown in their own fears." Kyle frowned. "The vessel? What does that mean?" Michelle didn't answer.

The shadows came before midnight. The church doors burst open, and the air grew thick. From the corners, faces took shape - Kyle's father, Chris's sister, Michelle's mother - their voices weaving into a chorus of guilt. "You let us die," they hissed. Michelle steadied her breath. "You're not real." The illusions dissolved. But then, Clara screamed. She fell onto her knees, clutching her chest. "It's inside me," she gasped. "It's burning." The air around her warped. Her skin rippled, black veins spreading beneath the surface. The candles exploded. Michelle flipped through the journal, panic rising. "Elias explained in his journal that the vessel chooses empathy, someone open to pain." Clara's eyes turned solid black. "It hurts," she whispered, and then screamed as something tore out of her. Dark tendrils erupted from her spine, shredding flesh and bone. Her body lifted from the floor, suspended by the shadows spilling from within. Chris staggered back, horror twisting his face. "Clara!" Kyle shouted. Her voice came from everywhere and nowhere, layered and echoing: "You called me. You gave me breath. Now I am all that you fear." Her body split apart, dissolving into the growing storm of darkness that filled the church. Where Clara had stood, the Abyss towered, shifting, screaming faces twisting through its form. Michelle clutched the journal. "If we reflect it, if she sees herself, it might break!" They began the incantation: "By the fear once faced and not fled, I raise the light that is earned, not given. Let bravery be named; not as absence of dread, but as the will that walks through it. Let sacrifice be weighed, not in blood, but in what she chose to leave behind. Abyss, born of unreflected terror, beheld, now, in the mirror of knowing..." The sigil on the floor flared with blinding light. The creature convulsed, its many faces flickering, and for an instant, Clara's human eyes appeared within the void. "Michelle..." her voice whispered faintly, distant, terrified. "I can still see you," Clara cried. "It's too deep. Seal it." Her tone changed, steadier, resolute. "Do it before I lose what's left of me." Tears streaked Michelle's face as she spoke the final words: "You are seen, and in seeing, diminished. I seal thee within remembered shadow. Fear acknowledged. Courage affirmed. The circle closes." The light blazed, and the Abyss screamed, not in pain, but in despair. As it collapsed inward, Michelle heard Clara's last whisper echo through the fading darkness: "Tell them I wasn't afraid." Then silence.

When dawn came, the fog began to lift. The air smelled of rain and ash. The nightmares were gone. Michelle stood on the chruch steps, the scorched journal clutched in her hands. Kyle and Chris stood beside her, hollow-eyed. "She's gone," Kyle said softly. Michelle nodded. "Her body, yes. But she's still in there. Keeping it contained." Chris looked up at the pale morning sky. "Do you think she's suffering?" Michelle shook her head. "No. She faced her fear. That's more peace than most ever find." In the distance, the mist swirled once, and for a moment, it formed the faint outline of a girl's face, smiling sadly before fading into the light.



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